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Topic: I have a story pitch for CSI Miami

#	Author	Message
1	DAR Mon 6/2/2008 9:38a	that I think I'm going to send in, but tell me what you guys think. EXT. Miami early morning We are at a high rise construction site. A man of Cuban/American descent about mid forties with a gray walrus type mustache walks out of a trailer with a cup of coffee and blueprints in his hands. His most likely the foreman. He heads towards the service elevator to go up to what will be the fifth floor. Flash Cut: Two co-workers both in their mid 20's white males are on the same service elevator we just saw. They walk off and see the foreman with a steel i-Beam impaled into his torso. Flash Cut: We see the familar CSI Miami crew. Sgt Frank Tripp is chatting with the two workers. Det's Calleigh Duquense and Eric Delko are taking photos and reviewing the scene. We then see arriving on the elevator Lt. Horation Caine, he takes his sun glasses off. Caine: What do we have? Tripp: These two came into work saw their boss dead called us. Duquense: It looked like the beam killed him instantly. Delko: Looks like accident here Horation. Horatio looks up and see's the wire that was holding the i-Beam. The camera flashes up to it and it appears the wire was cut. Horatio knows this is no mere accident. Horatio: That wire didn't break it was cut. Horatio then puts on his sunglasses Horatio: It looks like this murder investigation(dramatic pause) is under construction. Cut to opening theme of the Who's Won't Get Fooled Again.
2	Dave Mon 6/2/2008 11:00a	I have a really close family friend on the show want me to print it and give it to her?
3	x Pirate_Princess x Mon 6/2/2008 5:39p	Sounds interesting! After what happened on CSI Vegas, I may go back to watching Miami!

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